Open Poetry #14 |
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short_stuff03469 New Member
since 2001-06-03
Posts 6 |
I know you want to go Yet I don’t see why You would miss so much You would never get to drive Never get to live in your own house Never graduate from collage Never travel to places you’ve never been Never become famous Never get to see what the future holds You would be greatly missed Things would be so different I would be without my best friend A piece of me would be missing School would never be the same You have effected many people With you gone These people would be lost I know you want to go Yet I don’t see why |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A good question asked" A very good poem of query into a human situation! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
good poem i enjoyed it alot |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Really liked this good written poem. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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