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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-06-03 10:25 AM

             “ONE MORE TOMORROW”
                             by
                         Bill Charles
                            ~~~~
I remember the day you whispered to me,
        and asked if I were only yours,
                body, heart, and soul…
And I said yes, but paid it no never mind,
        for I knew that along the way,
                all of these, you had stole….

This morning I held you in my arms,
        feeling my heart beat faster because of,
                your many tender advances…
My eyes closed, soft fingers touched my lips,
        and my senses felt them search,
                for their pleasures…

A gentle mist fell, of special beauty it was,
        as tender passions started to awake,
                and bodies yearned…
Flames of desire, no longer were only dim,
        but heated by the blaze,
                and we danced, as the fire burned,

You ask me not to forget, the way you care,
        I say it will never leave,
                for feelings deep within, are special…
There’s only one like you, that has entered this heart,
        and I ask for just one more tomorrow,
                with you…
                          ~~~~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-03 10:35 AM

Beautiful request.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2001-06-03 10:41 AM

nice poem

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-03 02:40 PM

Very romantic and filled with lovely thoughts. May your wish come true, Bill.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-06-03 02:48 PM

Such a wonderful respect flowing through your words. "Cherish" comes to mind.

"I am not now that which I have been."

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-06-03 06:28 PM

Tender words have been written. Now all you have to do is stand by your words and tomorrow will always be there for you.
Very sweet!!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-06-03 06:31 PM

Hey Bill beautifully romantic like you can write so well. Just one more tommorrow for everyday should work well forever!!

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

7 posted 2001-06-05 07:45 AM

Bill

Everyone wishes for once more tomorrow - especially if it is with someone you really care for. Nicely done.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2001-06-06 10:14 PM

Such a feeling this left me with thank you Romantic Bill....

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-06-06 10:22 PM

this is a keeper!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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