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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-06-03 09:52 AM

Feathers Of Your Wings

To know that peaks of joy exist
You must compare a graph, a list.
Of valley’s bright with sun and green
And rugged mountains lean and mean.

Start your feet on their mundane way
Make the rounds of your mundane day.
Lower yourself into your well
Of all past hurt and all past hell

Only then can you tweak the peaks
Against the base of darkest bleaks
Expose your world and fly your dove
Into the high and low of love

For freedoms made of living things
Those feathers grown upon your wings
Shown in the light and dark of hue
That shines within your eyes and you.

It is a window of your soul
It is a doorway to your goal.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 06-03-2001).]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-03 10:35 AM

Lower yourself into your well
Of all past hurt and all past hell

Only then can you tweak the peaks
Against the base of darkest bleaks
Expose your world and fly your dove
Into the high and low of love

For freedoms made of living things
Those feathers grown upon your wings
Shown in the light and dark of hue
That shines within your eyes and you.

It is a window of your soul
It is a doorway to your goal.
==============================

and by the gift of your pennings written from your soul of wise ...
we too ... fly beside you ....
and THIS PROVES what I have known all along...
you NEVER needed Randy to be able to fly

*winkiewinkie*
love ya Stinkie
me

I'm not right ... you're not wrong ...
Still I dont know ... what this love of ours is built upon.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-03 10:42 AM

Well done my friend.
A doorway it is,indeed.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-06-03 11:05 AM

"into the high and low of love..."

What a line!
What a Sigh!

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-06-03 11:31 AM

Such a wonderful cadence and rhyme to these sentiments of love and inspiration Sy, truly a beautiful piece of writing.

Best wishes,
/Kit

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-06-03 11:39 AM

Wonderful, Seymour! The flow of this is superb, the message grand.

I do wonder if 'graft' is the word you want here, however. It of course means to graft together one plant with another, and also to receive money dishonestly. I might not have read the definitions completely enough to come to the one you're using here, but I couldn't find one that seemed to fit. Please teach me if you meant this word. I'm wondering if you meant 'graph.'

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-06-03 01:21 PM

"Expose your world and fly your dove
Into the high and low of love"

Love this. Beautifully said.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2001-06-03 01:36 PM

Ah Seymour you're writing such learned and sage lines these days!!  Great writing!
I think I might be able to live with these great lines!!

               "Lower yourself into your well
                Of all past hurt and all past hell

                Only then can you tweak the peaks
                Against the base of darkest bleaks
                Expose your world and fly your dove
                Into the high and low of love

                For freedoms made of living things
                Those feathers grown upon your wings
                Shown in the light and dark of hue
                That shines within your eyes and you.

                It is a window of your soul
                It is a doorway to your goal."

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-06-03 01:48 PM

If I were to tell where I liked your words best, I'd have to qoute the whole poem.....
Indeed, such wisdom........
so much is said in so little and amidst peaks of mountains and doves of love......

Thank you for such a read.......
****************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-06-03 02:31 PM

JM,
Love you too, glad you liked. Still haven't seen Randy. Winkiewinkie Stinky

Interloper,
Yes indeed and thank you for the read.

Sunshine,
Into the high and low of love. *L*

Kit,
Thank you for the truely, truely. Sy

VAS,
Don't wonder, I meant graph and thank you much.

Poeminister,
Thank you for the beautifully said.

Ethome,
Thank you for the great. Sy

My Enchanted One,
Thank you again for your time, your read and your wonderful comment. Sy

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