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Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

0 posted 2001-06-01 02:45 PM

My Dearest,
I lay awake, each night
viewing stars amidst the darkness,
reminded of the brightness,
thy love adds to my life.

I am kissed by their twinkling touch
vibrating my inner self,
raising me to a level equal
to that of drifting clouddreams,
upon which I often float.

Each moment away from thy tender arms
leaves one in want, desiring the stronghold
placed upon this body,
willing it unto thee, causing an unsteadiness,
bringing me to my knees.

Every memory resides close to the surface
tingling my skin, reining me in,
allowing me to replace the hurts with the
pleasure-pain of loving all of thee.

Forgive me, My Darling,
for at this morn's dawning, I am
in need of thy thoughts...mysting in dreams.
And when I am all alone,
it is only My Knight, that replaces
the longing of my day.

Lovingly,
Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 06-01-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-01 02:48 PM

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-01-2001).]

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-06-01 02:50 PM

"pleasure-pain of loving"

Such longing here, expressed very beautifully in these words. Nicely done.

Poeminister

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-06-01 03:04 PM

oh yes i think all of us have experienced
the pleasure pain of love..very lovely Lady.

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-06-01 03:09 PM

I really like this verse......

                    "Every memory resides close to the surface
                     tingling my skin, reining me in,
                     allowing me to replace the hurts with the
                     pleasure-pain of loving all of thee."

Very nice poetry indeed!

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2001-06-01 04:09 PM

I am kissed by their twinkling touch
vibrating my inner self,
raising me to a level equal
to that of drifting clouddreams,
upon which I often float.

beautiful images lovely poem.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-06-01 05:10 PM

Yes I wish it were the other way around...less longing and more action...but alas it is not...James

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

7 posted 2001-06-01 05:12 PM

very lovely to read,thanks

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-02 10:47 AM

I know this longing Poet Fair. . . thou hast indeed seen into the heart of this one. . . and, as always, thou hast penned a form worthy to bear thy name. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-06-03 02:19 PM

Lady, I am your devoted fan. You write as I think.
Peace
Sandra

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