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The importance of time
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The importance of time |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
"what time is it" I pause, "about 12:30" the man thanks me and I turn my back sharp pains blossom between the ribs of my back and I collapse as I hear the man rustling in my jacket blackness, choking gagging on a tube in my throat forcing my eyes open all I see is blue scrubs and blood feeling light headed are they talking to me I just want to let the light wash me away "What time is it" "it's 1:15 doctor" "Ok call it" "time of death 1:15" |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"What time is it" Time to die. Well done JB, I like it. |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Very well said. Love the poem.. |
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