Open Poetry #14 |
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Jennifer |
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Deafheaven Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 23Sudbury, Ontario, Canada |
I think I'm fairly versed in words and take joy in the turning of a phrase Looking for hidden meaning and hidden thought Ordinary words used in extraordinary ways brings new depth to shallow perception Very special thoughts expressed in very special ways enhance life's play Even the most banal of situation becomes empowered with the writer's pen Yet despite the power of the scribe, some words I thirst to transform from pen to mouth Often the written seeks common bond but some words mean more when personalized with tone, inflection, and direction Under the guise of this contemplation is an expression of emotion concerning Jennifer Anne Marie, whose loveliness of soul has surely captured me Every thought that I've expressed through note has meant so very much but Not as much as the day I hold you in my arms, look into your eyes, and pass these words through breath |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions....with your wit, and adept pen, you are sure to find many who shall read yours, and we hope that you in turn will come to find many poets here whose work you enjoy as well! Now, sit back, relax, and enjoy Passions! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-02-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lovely, welcome to Passions. Kathleen Blake |
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Deafheaven Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 23Sudbury, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you to those who have welcomed me to this lovely abode |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Jennifer Anne Marie, whose loveliness of soul has surely captured me Every thought that I've expressed through note has meant so very much but Not as much as the day I hold you in my arms, look into your eyes, and pass these words through breath well written poem here really enjoyed the read. beautiful images Welcome to Passions. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice words of admiration Deafheaven...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Welcome! Glad you found your way to passions...and a very nice first entry you have.. ![]() It is to do with tree-ferns: |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Even the most banal of situation becomes empowered with the writer's pen ============================== Every thought that I've expressed through note has meant so very much but Not as much as the day I hold you in my arms, look into your eyes, and pass these words through breath =============================== This is wonderful...Welcome to Poetry Land... I look forward to reading more of your indepth turn of phrase ![]() very well done new poet, cool name too take care jm Im searchin for my warrior |
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