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Open Poetry #14

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-06-02 06:15 AM

Dreams are caught flowers,
Spinning within the water,
Conscience pools in sleep.

Gloom

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-06-02 06:56 AM

Well written! Between the title and the body of the poem comes the reader's imagination!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-06-02 07:27 AM

churning tidal waves
would draw the dreamer down, down
may dreams never drown

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-02-2001).]

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

3 posted 2001-06-02 07:35 AM

these are both truely wonderful

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2001-06-02 05:56 PM

This is very well written...haiku's are often hard to do successfully...

It is to do with tree-ferns:
mamuka, pongo, wheki.
Shelter under here is so easily understood.
From 'Hope', by Dinah Hawkins

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2001-06-02 07:48 PM

Thank you all,
your enjoyment please me.
I am honored by the kind words.

Gloom

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