Open Poetry #14 |
Sometimes Angels Unaware |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sometimes Angels Unaware ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sometimes angels flaunt their deeds drawing attention to their needs While other angels softly stay on scattered cloud far away And meditate in quiet way to make another's day I know just such an angel as this lighting stars on soft-blown kiss giving others credit for all the deeds she did implore Roses flower with a smiley face Carnations showering hinted trace Spring bouquet spreads hint of cheer While sweet Bird Of Paradise soars near I'd like to hug an angel, for all her thoughtfulness A friend of ours in need, caught her soft-blown kiss Bouquets sent in ALL our names you see 'From Your Friends At Passions In Poetry' ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautifully written and presented. This is a love-filled poem!! I'm sure the Angel you describe will love it. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is utterly beautiful, as yours always are love. What makes your work so special is the fact that you always sprinkle your works with Margie love, and that's why they shine. Utterly wonderful poem, written with your grace and your charm, and the extra sparkle is pure you. A delight my sister of heart, love and warm stuff as always take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely thoughts Marge...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I add some babe's breath, carnations and a few roses among your bouquet, Marge? Ah, thank you.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hey Marge, Did they throw you out? I thought you were an angel? Well in any case you write like one *L* Sy |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
What a beautiful token for your angel. I enjoyed your poem very much. Life is to short to not appreciate all of nature's gifts. As I sit & ponder in awe - quietly. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Yes, I read about the flowers, and am glad you wrote a poem thanking the angel who included us all. Marge thank you for being an angel also. Whoever and wherever you are God Bless You!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yer so beautiful..do ya know that??? One of MANY angels in this poetic home... very very cool Margie... spreading your own angel dust a lovely way to thank someone for doing something "just because" Im searchin for my warrior |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beyond beautiful! Beyond it! I so enjoyed it. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
OH MARGE WHAT MAGIC YOU CAPTURED IN THIS ONE another cherished keeper lovya dearly.........warrior |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Such sweet affections...lovely write. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
very pretty Marge, are we both thinking of angels lately, but mine are not as nice as yours. J |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank You Anonymous Flower AngelI was sure I knew who it was but it turned out not to be who I thought it was! Flowers given without a card of acknowledgement are most certainly from the heart and soul of an earth angel! So, I will hunt no further, but only say to this Angel, and I hope you are reading this...you have NO idea what your thoughtfulness did, no possible idea! A heart that was so forlorn and sad, suddenly saw and felt love, "sunshine", and new hope in a lot of darkness. Where there are friends there is love, and there is always hope. Thank you sweet earth angel, may God bless you always, and thank you for "putting my name on your card too!" ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful tribute, Marge...I love this... sp everytime I close my eyes, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dear Mr. or Mz. Angel: The hospital has been told to forward any flowers received to Koko's (Cherie's) house, as she was discharged yesterday and is home now trying to recover. Cherie knows of this kind jesture now as well, and wishes to thank you, Sharon ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Simply wonderful Marge! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm not sure who you're blowing kisses to with this one, but I trust your judgement Marge! So....smooochies!!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a beautiful tribute to this angel I'm sure she will love this! Wonderful words of appreciation Marge! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
oh......so softly twinkingly beautiful...... I don't know who is that angel but s/he surely deserve it if s/he has inspired you to write such beautiful poem...... =============== Angels on earth..... creatures of mystery sent from heaven above to lessen our misery ============== Thank you It's only me.......only me |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFriends of Passion~ Please know that the 'angel' mentioned here is aware of your sweet words. Sometimes ... just sometimes, someone comes along and gives quietly of themselves to someone they don't even know .... I think that's what earth angels are all about. Mysteria and Karilea ... Please don't polish my halo ! I swear, it was not me ! Thanks to each of you for enjoying my little thank you ... and in case an 'angel' peeks in ... KoKo ... You continue to just get better, honey. Take the utmost care of yourself and do exactly what the doctors (and friends) tell you to do. Love you ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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