Open Poetry #14 |
beyond the gates of Eden |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What is it I can do? This half of me in search of you? How much air can one lung breathe? How do I live with half of me? There is nothing without all... half of me before the fall... forever, I, beyond the gates, of Eden, I, forever wait and pray for deed to be redeemed... and once again, you're one with me. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Paradise lost and then regained to make the half again a whole is the wish I give..nicely done...gentle smile |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your day will come, my dear. I promise. Loved this (but then I love all you write!). |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and ever it shall be. . . wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Well if that don't get him I don't know what will. Lovely poem. Sy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Karen, Karen, Karen hon... remarkable the emotion you can put into your words... it's heady... hugs... K It is to do with tree-ferns: |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I adore anything written about Eden, my skin care is even called Eden and oh, I'm rambling again.... Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How much air can one lung breathe? How do I live with half of me? There is nothing without all... half of me before the fall... ============================== just how many mirrors can you hold up in one day... your muse is on fire baby.... (did you drink MY vials) *L* me |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this is so true and so perfectly said Sandra |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Yes, your day will come! It will! Beautifully written Sauni Sauni :) |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
this is a wonderful poem, feel the same. Life is to short to not appreciate all of nature's gifts. As I sit & ponder in awe - quietly. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Hon, I have tears and I am speechless.... truly. Maree |
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