Open Poetry #14 |
Passions Gallery: Saunni (the lyrics of your life) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm hearing that song again the song of your heart filling me again with the lyrics of your life telling the stories of a love discovered new playing on the radio crystal clear each note sweet and pure each word from the heart I turn it up and sing along and when your song is done I take the melody with me the notes filling the air and the lyrics of your life filling my heart ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Such a wonderful capacity you have, Sven. Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Great words to describe the song of Saunni. As always you have out did yourself. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wonderful discription through words...beautiful and lovely as always...thanks for sharing,sven i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I've been following this series with much interest. You've done well with them, as usual. Great job. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, That should do it, nice write. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I take the melody with me...I believe you've captured the sweet, sadness of her song! A precious addition to Passions Gallery. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I'm behind in my reading. Nicely done, Sven. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Another wonderful tribute from your pen...well done. Poeminister |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Interloper, thank you. . . inot2b, outdone myself?? Wow. . . . . . thank you. . . albert, thank you as always my friend for reading. . . PV, thank you for reading and for following. . . Sy, it does it for me. . . thank you. . . JLR, I'm glad that you think so!!! Thank you. . . Temptress, that's ok. . . they'll always be here. . . thank you. . . Poeminister, thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Sven you've done it again.lovely writing my friend |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, Sven, I did not realize this was on here! JLR asked me if I had seen it. I want to thank you so very much! This must have been on here on one of the days I wasn't online and is why I didn't respond! Oh, I can't believe you did this! It is beautiful! No one has ever written about me or for me, I usually do the writing. If I may ask, what made you write this? Thanks again... Sauni Sauni :) |
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