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Cannot Deny ----Senryu---
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Cannot Deny ----Senryu--- |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Dreams of You open Eyes terribly blind yet Love I cannot deny "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a delightful Senryu! let them follow you in sun share them with the night |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great work! I enjoyed very much! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Blind, but clairvoyant in the brightness of Dream-light Love guides through the Night I liked your Senyru very much. Nicely done Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Guided by the light Shining in a lovers eyes Cast out the darkness Lovely senryu...and from the looks of your replies...very inspiring as well |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Thank you all for your kind words and most of all your poetic responses. To be greeted with such replies, well they are the best replies I could imagine. Thank you all so very much. You have added greatly to the meaning of this simple poem. "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Silent song, no love can not be denied. enjoyed the read "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
~*~ I will not deny dreams of you open my eyes once blinded to love ~*~ Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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ArticulatedSigh Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 26 |
May as well add to the thread- Dreams call me to you to touch all forever pleads fill this thirst for you For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
to the well be drawn till comes forth the spring of hope and in hope, then dream no one said I couldn't add another, did they?....laughing... |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Well I too will add another to this thread, why not, better for her to see.And maybe a few more. Still all the better. Do you not see? Can you not feel, the word touch, speaks to you.Yes you, only you always. Remembering Love Giving moments hearts song touch Heaven again Love What to say I am hers she is my heart take me Now and always Yours When you read these words know the hearts breath that calls you singing I Love You "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." [This message has been edited by SilentSongs (edited 06-02-2001).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed the read... |
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