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Yesterday's Dreams |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Yesterday's Dreams ~*Marge Tindal*~  Oh, you cannot reach tomorrow from undreamed dreams of yesterday Plummeted into this abyss with slivered moon to light my way No shooting star to wish upon the Milky Way has lost her light I breathe a sigh cross welkin sky it travels far into the night Perhaps it falls in blind descent where wishes really do come true I would wish a perfect orbit around the galaxy of you Hold out your heart and wish for me to reach you through eternity ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Perhaps it falls in blind descent where wishes really do come true I would wish a perfect orbit around the galaxy of you Hold out your heart and wish for me to reach you through eternity" every time Marge.....smack dab in the heart.....wow...sigh....love love love this!!!  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, your mind is amazing! This one is outstanding, but I so love them all! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Only in Tindaltown do you get a dark little poem with a happy ending! I sure enuf loved this one, and it hit me right in the aorta alright! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Marge, This is simply gorgeous. So melodic I think I might just sing this one to sleep. Michael |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Marge, I have so little time lately for my computer, but I do specifically look for you when I am here. This is OUTSTANDING, absolutely beautiful..... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is rhyme divine... and Im making it mine!!! Exquisite Margie-girl!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Here, my heart, take it 'tis yours for eternity my promise to you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! This poem relates so very much to me, for my search for true love is still going on, and my skies always feel so gloomy and dark at nighttide, but when that falling star falls through the night and you catch it in your heart, the moon awakens with silken joy. (smiles) I love it!!! I've missed your lovely poetry so very much! I'm so sorry that I've barely commented in the last few months; I've been so busy in school and am just finishing exams today, but this summer I'll be flooding this board with my comments and with some new poems! Yesterdays dreams shalt become stars of tomorrow! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I get so tickled when you 'love love love' it !  Thank you always. Saunni~ Well ... my little heart gets all the credit for this one.  Mysteria~ *smiles*  Michael~ Thank you very much for the read and reply. Sweet dreams ! WhispersCaress~ What a lovely thing to say. Thank you so very much. Hope you get here more often as I enjoy reading you. JanetMarie~ Take it doll ! That little muse flung it my way for somebody ... musta' been you !  InterLoper~ Awwwww ! Thank you ... mght have to hold you to it ! Noah~ Thank you for the read and lovely reply. I trust you did well on your exams. I will look forward to reading more of your beautiful poetry. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Marge!! Wonderful!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ *Hugs* to you ... and thank you. It's good to see your smiling face ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked the sentiments of your first verse and if this is an ezample to go by, gosh, i sure have missed a lot offerings from you... searches through the forum for more... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Today has been made a useful day just because I could feast upon this beauty. Marge, Many thanks for this one, my regards to you Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Awwwww ! Thank you ... glad you enjoyed. Sudhir~ Sending big *hugs* for a captivating reply. Thank you so very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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