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Rainbow Kisses |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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You are the mist within the summer rain we blend like warm pastels of a rainbow painting kisses upon our windowpane You are the bouquet in scarlet Bordeaux I am a graceful ballerina dancing upon a music box in our sweet chateau You are my gallant white knight prancing I am a maiden upon a carousel enjoying the sweet art of romancing You are my oyster not an insensitive shell I am a pearl within depths of your soul the whispers upon the mirror of loves spell We are the bells chiming as the rain tolls We are not just in love we are but a whole Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 06-02-2001).] |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
What a sweet testimony to emotions met and growing. Thanks for the sharing "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Victoria, once again your messages are so pure and clear, l love reading your thoughts...gentle smile |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you silentsongs and logan..nice to hear from you both..glad you enjoyed  ~Victoria~
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
The beauty of this poem is stunning. I could see each image and see the history of a relationship become a snapshot. Excellent work. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was so beautiful! I loved it!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Victoria I have to tell you that I loved these metaphors so much and the writing has such a nice classy mood about it!.......Like this.... "You are the bouquet in scarlet Bordeaux I am a graceful ballerina dancing upon a music box in our sweet chateau." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Such color and depth to the lines...  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soft and lovely, Victoria! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Julian..thank you for peeking in today.. sans38..thank you..for visiting.. ethome..thank you so much..appreciate your nice comments. irish rose..thanks hon..hugs Denise..thank you so much..nice hearing from you ~Victoria~
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love the sweet chateau...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James...glad you liked thanks for peeking in..~Victoria~
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