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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-06-01 11:34 PM

A Night's Journey

Once again
I am awakened
by the ringing sounds, startling,
interrupting dreams of you.
Tapping on rooftops,
rhythm reigns.
A song heard,
lulling me to drift
into waiting arms, that hold
the memories I treasure.
Thoughts of you absorb
night's journey.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-01-2001).]

SilentSongs
Junior Member

since 2001-05-31

Posts 43
Mist of Time

1 posted 2001-06-02 12:10 PM

Most recognize lifes journey
by day few acknowledge the
miles we walk in darkness
and dreams

Thanks

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-06-02 09:10 AM

The play on words suits me well, Wynter....

thank you for this!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-06-02 10:06 AM

SilentSongs
Thank you for your thoughtful words...*s

~Wynter

Sunshine
hmm was there a play on words..sometimes I don't even realize..

M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-06-02 10:42 AM

Great write, wynter...I enjoyed this one...

sp

everytime I close my eyes,
I see your face,
I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize
that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-06-02 11:14 AM

1derful and another "short" one

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-06-02 11:17 AM

what can i say but i love it so

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-06-02 11:41 AM

snowpants
..oh you know what? it was the feeling you on the fingertips in your signature that gave me the idea for the  poem I posted a bit ago..called To Be...thank you *s

~W

every night I fantasize
that I can feel you on my fingertips...

I...yes this was the one I first wrote then I began to shrink...*s  thanks... YOU

Watersign6

what can I say..but thank you muchly  *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

8 posted 2001-06-03 09:18 AM

Hi Wynter,

This was beautiful, thank you sweetie.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-06-03 11:23 AM

a sojourn ....I loved it

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-06-03 11:33 AM

I love the flow in this Maureen, so lyrical and lovely.

Best wishes,
/Kit

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-06-08 12:34 PM

Cerenity, Irish and Kit..thank you for stopping to read *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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