Open Poetry #14 |
Hey, Dad!--written in 1998, revised today |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
HEY, DAD! Virginia Salter I hugged your knees And looked up high I saw how great you were Then you knelt down And picked me up Your voice in ear did purr. ~~~ We’d stroll the street While friends we’d greet I’d see your buckle glisten, We’d wind our way Throughout the day And to each word I’d listen. ~~~ One day astride your vest Where all your hugs were best With age your voice had mellowed, To show I’d come unto my own Into my shoes I’d grown My response, to you, I bellowed. ~~~ Then gray within your hair, Yet no change in spirit there, Though shoulders in a stoop Seeing, now, more eye to eye With less each day o’er which to vie I’d come to you to get the scoop. ~~~ copyright June 1998 |
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© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved | |||
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, good and faithful daughter. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
really good poem an in Honor of your Dad way to go |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Virginia what a beautiful tribute to your dad and how your love shows as you travel through the years! I'm proud of you and your dad, that's how it should be!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
er, i don't get the last two lines...will you mind explaining?? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely written VAS... enjoyed the read |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Of course, faterider, I'd be glad to explain my meaning. As one gets older, more mature, there can be less over which to argue, and in fact the mature child acquiesces to going to the parent to get good sound advice. Thank you everyone for reading and for your encouraging comments. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you VAS...with your explanation, i appreciated this one on a better light... much appreciated... |
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