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Frailty
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Frailty |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Frailty We, all of us, look for a wit A subtle laugh, a witty bit A bit of this a bit of that A little sweet a little fat And all of us, love to fit Within the web of peoples knit Accepted by embrace or clap A touch upon our back, a slap A moment in the lime lights light An instant of a happy flight The uch within a moments much The joining of the common touch A flighty thing that happens rare A pushy thing that makes us dare. A bell that rings within our head A seed that takes a rose to bed We’re all of us, guilty as sin This human frailty within |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
Seymour, I really like this one. You have captured a universal truth. Even cranky old recluses such as I am need that occasional human touch. Thank you for sharing. theLadypoet "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sudhir, every word in this is so true. Kathleen Blake |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. Enjoyable read. Thank you. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The uch within a moments much The joining of the common touch A flighty thing that happens rare A pushy thing that makes us dare. A bell that rings within our head A seed that takes a rose to bed We’re all of us, guilty as sin This human frailty within =============================== "A seed that takes a rose to bed" oh what a very cool and beautiful line that is... as is the whole intend of this poem.... and that ending couplet....divine baby...divine yes..guilty as charged...and wouldnt have it any other way perfect Stinky...perfect  meI'm hanging on your every word |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I want that uch.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ladypoet, A quip fit for print. hank you. Irish, Sudhir is a friend of mine, I'll tell him. LOL Interloper, Thank you for the well done. JM, "A seed that takes a rose to bed." I liked that line myself. Thank you sweet and for that I'll write you a poem. Tomorrow. Winkiewinkie Stinky Sunshine, You got it. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed well done Sir. . . only you could speak of an "uch" with excellent form. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Who can deny...we are all guilty only in our own degrees. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thank you my friend. Poeminster, True and thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH BOY!!!     IS IT TOMORROW YET???  OK--OK... I'll be good and patient  *winkiewinkie*   ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the mean time...I got something for you...  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Indeed...smiling at you and laughing out loud at the above graphic from the irrepressible JM! loved your message, and here is some applause for YOU. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"We’re all of us, guilty as sin This human frailty within" so true....... so true....... and how painful that it is true I've always feared this human fraility Wonderful .......thank you for sharing it ************************************ It's only me.......only me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I see Randy is trying to smuggle it to you. Tomorrow winkiewinkie Stinky Serenity, Thank you twice. *L* Sy Enchanter, That is an enchanting comment. Thank you |
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