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The Right Write
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The Right Write |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Right Write ~*Marge Tindal*~ A little ink - a slender pen A well of thought from deep within A hope, a dream - a bright tomorrow A little joy - a bit of sorrow A moment born of inspiration A tender sigh of resignation A chance to waltz within the rhyme A dance to last - through all of time A rainbow glowing eternal light A dream to hold you through the night A hand to squeeze when times are rough A friend who cares just enough A poet or a poetess A friend - a friend regardless ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
As always you know just how to write the right thing. Reading poetry lets me laugh, cry and sometimes just sit and wonder. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is beautiful Marge, "A chance to waltz within the rhyme." I wish I had written that. Joyce |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh..to have friends like this. Lovely writing, Marge. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You write right into our hearts sweet poet. Beautifully done. Poeminister |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is one of those GREAT ones just like all the others.... A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
oh you clever thing you! A pen nib! What next? Oh did I mention I liked the poem too? ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, Oh love this is perfect, I utterly adore this, but you know that don't you, absolutely wonderful the shape is perfect and the poem is a dream.  Margie girl utterly terrific love Love as always Mushy   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
INot2B~ These little thoughts rushed so quickly to the page - it just MUST have been 'right'. Thank you - friends and their poetry do all of those things to me too. Joyce~ I'm not sure I can lay claim to the thought, as a little muse of joy laid it in my inkwell. Thank you so much. Temptress~ Ahhh ! We all have the ink of poets and friends to fill our inkwells. Thank you, lady. PoeMinister~ Oh, I thank you for letting it settle in your heart. BSlicker~ A friend a day, I really think Keeps the well full of ink. Thank you. Mysteria~ Must have been meant to be - the thoughts fell just so quickly - In looking through your eyes I see - A nib - a nib ... it surely be ! THANK YOU ! Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ There I was - typing in - acknowledgement to poet friends And when I posted I looked back to see A SWEET note from you - just for me Thank you, lovie ! You give me a smile to wear all day ! Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments to brighten up my morning Marge, thank you for these sweet thoughts ... much enjoyed the rhythm and flow in this lovely piece of poetry.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
There's never a wrong reason to write is there my friend...and you have a poem for every occasion...I would do cartwheels though the center of the street to have one teaspoon of your poetic talent...well heck...I'd do cartwheels down the center of the street for a nickle...but you know what I mean  A beautiful write Marge~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I've never known you to wrong a write. This one is a treasure. *L* Sy |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Marge, this is a perfect combination of ryhme and shape and meaning. Thank you for being such a wonderful poet. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
One thing is for sure Marge, you know how to write the right write! You just do it every time. This poem is so smooth and well metered. It's absolutely wonderful. Another great write from you Marge! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ you have this beautiful gift to touch hearts and to find places inside....that no one else does This is so beautiful Love this one!! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
ink a slender pen thought from deep within a dream waltz with rhyme such a lovely piece of poetry with witch to end this week. Brava!! "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BRAVO! Thank God I did not miss this one! Author! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this is going right into my library after i read it a few more times,i enjoy you so an hope to learn some poetic lessons from those here who are truely blessed with poetic skill this passions in poetry is such a thrill i think i am catchin on |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am back. Oh by the way...it is a Mount Blanc nib! As is your poem first class too! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
beautifully done marge.... thanks once more for sharing through all the wrongs you had time and the courage to write right..... my hats off again,,,,,, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Thank you for letting me share your morning ! That makes me happy.  ButterfliesDC~ It's really good to see you in here, love. Really ?  Now THAT I want to see ! Seymour~ You quip a pretty quick 'write' yourself, sweetie ! Titia~ I appreciate your comments so much. ETHome~ You're a doll ! I swear it was a 3 minute dash - start to post ! I think there is a land where words are waiting to take flight - I'm glad this one flew to my runway ! SEA~ You know my answer to that - When it comes FROM the heart - it's meant to be. I LOVE YOU ! Julian~ Thank you VERY much ! InterLoper~ That makes two of us !Thank you. KelliKay~ A pleasure to know you liked it well enough to library it. I don't know about that 'skill' stuff ... That's what muses are for, I think. I just write what comes and LOVE sharing ! Mysteria~ Whoa ... couldn't possibly have been mine ! LOL ! Too 'rich' for my ink ! MySoaringEagle~ Thank you ... and you KNOW I appreciate that with all my heart. You are always 'there' when I 'need' that support. I love you ! ! ! ! *Thanks to ALL of you ... Sharing is soooooooooooo much fun ! Everyday is a great day to be a poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Hi..I thought I had replied to this yesterday, I know I read it and loved it and still do..you always write the right write for me, and it's just right! Hugs! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
"a dance to last, through all of time" ahh, Marge, you strike within me. So well done...gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ You are such a wonderfully supportive friend. Regardless ... you always love me. Thank you, Sis. Logan~ Thank you ... *smiling back* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge....this is going into a frame, which shall sit on my desk[s]... if all the others would just listen! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ That is a wonderful compliment. I thank you so very much. Hopefully it will touch others as it touched you. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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