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Captivating Music
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Captivating Music |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Captivating Music captive the music swelled as fingers dipped in milk black to white’s full orchestration met me and thee in express symphony grand piano which seized the keys black & white would greet we in this spell, held captive bass black I wore swerved in music’s own chord sway of hip met greet of eyes’ groan click of heels’ intent, low one’s heart did moan sweet a dream to meet in music dark met day in sun’s light in this spell, held captive |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is captivating, indeed..... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Sunshine play that music an write that poem for you please us all so when your talented words flow  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
This pulls me in...love it  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
YEA!!! You do these wonderfully!! aren't they fun  |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Wow! What a soothing melody. This is breath taking. I had to read a few times. One of my favorites. Thank you for the read! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Well this captured me. *L* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I was drawn to these words... Kathleen Blake |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, utterly fabulous, captivating music, captivating shape love. Oh that you should write words of wonder, always Puck is running to catch up Persephone. Absolutely fabulous work and yes I love it don't I always (Mmmm but only because it's perfect  )Take care love as always Puck Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marvelous write Karilea! The format is a real eye catcher too! What type of black is this? "bass black I wore." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
shhhhhhhhh. . . I can hear it now. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Be still my heart! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
click of heels’ intent, low one’s heart did moan sweet a dream to meet in music dark met day in sun’s light in this spell, held captive I am dancing as we speak.... "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yanno...that looks like a single castanet to me, and then off my imagination went, but you don't want to hear the journey! Nice read Sunny one! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sunshine, I think this is the poem that has been calling to me in the archives tonight. I am gonna leave with this one tucked under my arm. I am keeping it - so there!  Love you, Alison |
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