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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
This is my first post here .......I hope you would like it  Play your music Real loud And I won’t stop listening Play your music so low But I will hear it still Play your music real loud People might flee Might cover their ears And not listen to thee But I will I will listen till my ears drop And all voices shut themselves down I will listen till my world fades And seizes to be I will listen till All pains wash themselves away Till all joys unite night and day I will listen till my heart reconciles my mind And they would sit together Eternally I will listen till all notes All music dies And fades away Yes.. Play your music Real loud Or simply so low But I will listen to thee I will strive to hear the faintest notes You might play I will silence the world To listen to thee I will make it mute Dumb With no sounds to interrupt thee I will be your only audience The only one who would stand eternally Who would clap for the music Who would cry silently Whenever your music touches me Who would dance jubilantly Whenever your music evokes joy in me Who would ponder Listen and wonder As your music Unfolds your story to me Yes… I’ve heard it Your music Telling things unsaid before Predicting a future unknown And speaking of secrets untold But I will learn them all All secrets Tiny or huge Behind the lowest notes you might play The simplest aria You might sing Or the high-pitched notes You might produce I will listen to all sounds All utterances Clear or obscure Your music might give to me… So play your music Loud or low I will listen even if you don’t know…. ************************** It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I generally enjoy piano music...but this had the whole orchestra in it! Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this is wonderful!! it is filled with true adoration, I love the line about the music telling the story of the player thanks for posting...and welcome!!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions....play on! Kathleen Blake |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Sunshine How could I thank you?? It is nice to be so warmly welcomed.  ---------------------------- Vas I'm happy you liked it and thank you dearly. What's really wonderful is you , the members of this forum....... Music.....could also be the words someone would say....... and they might carry you away...... like beautiful cascading music Won't you agree?  Thank you again ***************************** It's only me.......only me |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Irish_rose Thank you dearly...... I'd hopefully play on.......if you would listen Thank u again ********************* It's only me.......only me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yes… I’ve heard it Your music Telling things unsaid before Predicting a future unknown And speaking of secrets untold But I will learn them all All secrets Tiny or huge Behind the lowest notes you might play The simplest aria You might sing Or the high-pitched notes You might produce I will listen to all sounds All utterances Clear or obscure Your music might give to me… So play your music Loud or low I will listen even if you don’t know…. ===================== this is a wonderful entry ... Welcome to Poetry Land Melody... your written a symphony of a tribute. very well done. take care jm I'm hanging on your every word |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i love it an will keep reading an listening to all you write with your talented pen  |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Melody is the master, the mistressmuse undeniable. If you believe me not, listen to people whistling chord progressions or harmonic modulations as they walk done the street. UH HU, when was the last time you heard thast. Be thy own true Melody. That is always enough. "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." [This message has been edited by SilentSongs (edited 05-31-2001).] |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
great poem..another brand new favourite take care and all the best |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Janet Marie Thank you.....It is surly nice to be here thank you for reading it...... Take care u too ------------------------ watersign6 I'm so glad that you loved it .....and would be surely happier when you read and listen to me....... Thank you from my heart --------------------------- Silentsongs oh, .....I'm no master A mistress perhaps The last time I heard that........mmmmmmmm....I don't know How I hope it would always be enough.... and a big hearty thanks to you. -------------------------- Ann Thank you for reading it.......take care you too. ----------------------------- It's only me.......only me |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
welcome to passions, enjoyed the poem. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy your stay! You're going to do alright if you keep writing like this..... ."With no sounds to interrupt thee I will be your only audience The only one who would stand eternally Who would clap for the music Who would cry silently Whenever your music touches me Who would dance jubilantly Whenever your music evokes joy in me Who would ponder Listen and wonder As your music Unfolds your story to me" Like I wrote, if you keep writing like that you'll fit right in here! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Brian maddenn Thank you dearly and thank you for taking the time to read it ************************ ethome Thank you ......I will surely enjoy it with all of the nice talented people here........ and I hope I'll keep up that ************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedMelody~ Sing your songs play the notes We will read the heart's emote Softly sung in gentle beat Sit back, enjoy prop up your feet For you came here in poet's roam Your sweet music adds to our home Welcome to the circle of friendship, poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh......~Marge~ ***************** Songs will be sung you would hear and that's would surely give my heart so much cheer **************** Thank you dearly ......from **************************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Enchanted-Melody, This is very nice and so much enjoyed, I welcome you to Passions and hope you enjoy your stay, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Cerenity........ Thank you very much. I'm really glad that I have found this lovely forum. =============== Interloper Thank you dearly ***************************************** It's only me.......only me |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Your peom carries it music across the page, Your notes of words beautiful. Lovely piece. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Latin passion....... Thank you for listening to my music..... ************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . there's just so much here. . . feelings and thoughts. . . all told in my most favorite of languages. . . Music. . . excellent. . . welcome. . . and I hope that you'll share more of your work with us. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Music often brings the same feeling to me...but I never expressed it this well. Welcome to Passions |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our humble home. I hope you enjoy yourself!! You've entered with a wonderful poem..I will certainly look forward to reading more from you.  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i confess that i have little patience for long poems but this is an exception...i dig the original theme and the stanzas in which you elaborate upon your theme... and ohh, welcome to passions...i hope you will stay a while |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Sven Thank you dearly for the up-lifting encouraging comment .....and the welcome Hopefully, I will as long as u listen ******************* Martie Thank you soooooooo much ***************** Poet deVine Such a lovely home you have here..... Thank you dearly for making me feel so welcomed. ***************** faterider I must confess a fraction of that too but I'm really glad that mine proved to be an exception I'm planning to stay as long as I am welcomed Thank you alot ****************** It's only me.......only me |
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