Open Poetry #14 |
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See This Man |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England ![]() |
See This Man See this man who is standing there With this man my life I would share I want to walk beside him all my days Dance in his arms as the music plays I would spend my days in endless bliss Held in love and wrapped in his kiss But I can’t in honesty call him mine My heart won’t in his light ever shine See this man who is all I ever desire With this man I could dance in fire My soul would live ever in his light My eyes besotted by his dear sight I would hold him close to my heart Telling him that I’d never depart But I can’t truthfully say I love you He has someone else to who he’s true See this man who has my hearts eye With this man I could live and die My heart would give anything to stay Any sacrifice or any price I would pay I would be enraptured for all eternity Protected by my love from fates cruelty But I can’t pretend that he is for me There’s another who has his priority Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very nicely written! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i just enjoyed this poem so very much,it is great ![]() |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is excellent. Life is complicated especially when we find the one we know we'd be happy with, but someone else found them first. These two lines let it know it will never be. There’s another who has his priority |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Seems like the good ones are taken or don't want to be taken...yet we all seem to be recirculated eventually...James |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Get in there and fight, MM! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are an intelligent woman, and the wisdom rebounds within.... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
a lucky man he is, mushy one, to instill those thoughts in you....this is GOOD! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
how sad! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm sure that we have all known this feeling love. . . you tell it so well. . . great job. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I have known this, and you convey this well. ![]() |
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