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Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2001-05-31 04:48 AM

~* Curtain Call *~

A curtain of rain;

At center stage, the rainbow ...

Hard act to follow.

*
art: ~www.allwall.com~
"After The Storm" - Michael Coleman

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-05-31 05:15 AM

beautiful haiku.....love it

((hugs))
Charisma

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 05-31-2001).]

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-05-31 06:04 AM

Follow the Rainbow,
It’s a door to the next act,
Raise up the curtain

Gloom

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

3 posted 2001-05-31 07:23 AM

what a marvelous Haiku

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-05-31 07:51 AM

Mysteria~
You colored my morning with beauty.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2001-05-31 08:08 AM

Oh, this should just stay at the top!! It greets my morning eyes with gentleness, and beauty!! Thank you!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-05-31 01:07 PM

Thank you all ~*~ I wrote this so it would be there to great you this morning, glad you liked it!

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

7 posted 2001-06-01 01:02 AM

a spear from the east
struck color into morning
follow the magic

"I am not now that which I have been."

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

8 posted 2001-06-01 01:51 AM

*sigh*
I wish I could do haikus like this. I'm currently trying to learn to write them again. I have soo much trouble with keeping my imagery with trying to force syllables in there a certain way. This was excellent.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

9 posted 2001-06-01 02:07 AM

Beautiful Haiku. Well done.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-06-01 03:32 AM

Gee you guys - I bow and say thank you, as I keep forgetting to do these little guys (they look so lonesome on a page

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