Tender Seduction......Tanka

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Charisma

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lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-05-31 03:30 AM

photo: ©2001 Nicole Hoffman
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Tender Seduction

Gentle rays surround
Moment of intimacy
Tender seduction
Of sunlight’s flirting game
Pulling sweet night slowly near

Charisma
~*TMP*~
31/05/01

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-05-31 03:46 AM

Charisma I'm always so impressed by how well you can write in this style and this is no exception!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-05-31 06:54 AM

Charisma~
Adore this gentle flirt of your thoughts!
Lovely - lovely - lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

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Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2001-05-31 07:56 AM

Charisma...
Very beautiful first read of my morning!! And I love the graphic, (but you knew I would!!)

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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4 posted 2001-05-31 11:11 PM

love it charisma...very romantic...hugs

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

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Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-05-31 11:31 PM

Beautiful...very enchanting.

Poeminister

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Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-06-01 06:25 PM

Beautiful. Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

SEA

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with you

7 posted 2001-06-01 07:31 PM

Ok,

this is my new fav of yours

I LOVE this!

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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Netherlands

8 posted 2001-06-01 07:39 PM

Charisma, this is a real beauty

Love your work

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-06-05 10:43 AM

Thank you all for your lovely comment, as I am so glad that you liked the tanka.
love you all.

((hugs))
Charisma

shawana
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since 2000-11-02

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10 posted 2001-06-08 09:48 AM

Thank you ever so much...;-)
Soon...
trims & amatoo
~*p*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2001-06-11 06:41 PM

Beautiful writing Charisma....James

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

12 posted 2001-06-12 09:59 AM

Tender Seduction

Gentle rays surround
Moment of intimacy
Tender seduction
Of sunlight’s flirting game
Pulling sweet night slowly near

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Oh.....what a tender seduction

Thank you for a lovely piece.....

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It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

13 posted 2001-06-12 03:55 PM

shawana: thank YOU my dear, dear friend.

selamatoo

JamesMichael: thank you for reading and the beautiful, my friend.

MyEnchanted_Melody: thank you for your kind comment, glad you liked it.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-02-05 09:58 PM

(sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile, your imagery is wonderful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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