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Tender Seduction......Tanka
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Tender Seduction......Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 photo: ©2001 Nicole Hoffman ***** Tender Seduction Gentle rays surround Moment of intimacy Tender seduction Of sunlight’s flirting game Pulling sweet night slowly near Charisma ~*TMP*~ 31/05/01 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Charisma I'm always so impressed by how well you can write in this style and this is no exception! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Adore this gentle flirt of your thoughts! Lovely - lovely - lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Charisma... Very beautiful first read of my morning!! And I love the graphic, (but you knew I would!!)  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it charisma...very romantic...hugs ~Victoria~
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful...very enchanting. Poeminister |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful. Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ok,  this is my new fav of yours I LOVE this! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Charisma, this is a real beauty  Love your work Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all for your lovely comment, as I am so glad that you liked the tanka. love you all. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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shawana Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 14 |
Thank you ever so much...;-) Soon... trims & amatoo ~*p*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful writing Charisma....James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Tender Seduction Gentle rays surround Moment of intimacy Tender seduction Of sunlight’s flirting game Pulling sweet night slowly near ------------- Oh.....what a tender seduction Thank you for a lovely piece..... *************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
shawana: thank YOU my dear, dear friend. selamatoo JamesMichael: thank you for reading and the beautiful, my friend. MyEnchanted_Melody: thank you for your kind comment, glad you liked it. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile, your imagery is wonderful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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