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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-06-13 12:26 PM


with the sun shining so bright today
and this music in my heart
flowing so free
exploding from
my heart
onto the pages
of my life
sharing
caring
loving
this summer time
watching the kids
run
~ remembering ~
my time in the sun
those carefree days
.........of playing...........
the music that tuned
our hearts in
and let them play along
learning the words
wasn't necessary
nor demanded
because the songs
came from our hearts


~SEA~


© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-06-13 12:30 PM


Sea,
A heart felt write.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-13 12:33 PM


and the beat goes on!
VAS
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3 posted 2001-06-13 12:38 PM


yes, early morning sunshine is so much music to our hearts...and we sing along in our spirits, no words are needed as it soothes our chilled souls.

lovely poem

Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-06-13 12:44 PM


Sometimes songs are best without words...Lovely writing.

Poeminister

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5 posted 2001-06-13 12:50 PM


Sing it Sea-girlie  
love the flow of this one...
Enjoy!!!

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

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6 posted 2001-06-13 01:14 PM


interesting to me how form and flow create music of their own... and you played quite a tune here...


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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-06-13 01:22 PM


Yes!
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 2001-06-13 06:54 PM


So true Sea, so very true..:-)

HUGS

SEA
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9 posted 2001-06-13 07:46 PM


thank you all very very much!   Today was beautiful...and the kids.... .....crazy as their mom   ~SEA
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10 posted 2001-06-14 02:05 AM


SEA~
Just delightful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-06-14 02:23 AM


lovely piece...i really liked how you wrote it

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

SEA
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12 posted 2001-06-14 02:28 AM


thank you Marge  

Albert...thanks for reading me  

~SEA

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13 posted 2002-02-05 09:52 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the beauty of innocence and laughter fill your golden words, the music will always sing in our hearts for this beauty will always beat with us! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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