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LittleCookie
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 55
asheville,NC,UnitedStates

0 posted 2001-05-31 01:30 AM

Alas,my heart bleeds
as a rose with its
thorns plucked thereof,

like a wave crashing
against an
abandoned shore,

no witnesses,
noone to mourn,

take from me all
that I desireth,

better to be unfeeling
than to care at all,

fleeting love abroad
sparrows wings,

he is banished from me,
I shall not breathe again.

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-31 01:46 AM

very emotional.....I liked this one

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-05-31 01:52 AM

ahh, have we all not felt this way, and usually more than once on life..a lovely way to share ...gentle smile

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

3 posted 2001-05-31 02:21 AM

Such shattered pieces do fill the warehouses of my being.

You speak it well.

I have a friend who once said-"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-05-31 02:25 AM

The feeling of emptiness is well captured by your words here! Very enjoyable read!

JCGF
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 72
MA

5 posted 2001-06-01 03:10 PM

Like a wave crashing against and abandoned shore.

I love that. I can picture it. This is nice. Thanks for good read.

Hugs,
Tammy

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

6 posted 2001-06-01 05:05 PM

"better to be unfeeling
than to care at all,"

How many times we've wished that.......

Thank you for a good touching read
************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

7 posted 2001-06-01 05:09 PM

you have captured the feelings very well here
keep on writing

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-06-01 05:13 PM

I know the feelings here. Well expressed.

Poeminister

LittleCookie
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 55
asheville,NC,UnitedStates

9 posted 2001-06-01 05:37 PM

Thank you Sea, Logan, Death, Ethome, JCGF,
My enchanted Melody, watersign6,and Poeminister!!

I love writing but actually
I love to read it more

LittleCookie~~

:*)Agile in love,while rooted in soul

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