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Blackdrake
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 83
Depends on the day :)

0 posted 2001-05-31 12:55 PM

My eyes stare sightlessly
as i explore the depths of mind
Immagination pulles me down
to a place of ceaseless time

A knight slays a dragon
then rescues his fair maid
Journying to the centre of the earth
where dinosaurs rule a cave
To a magic ring to the stars
where aliens rule the skies
Ten thousand leagues under the sea
where every dream comes alive
To an enchanted sword within a stone
where a boy becomes high king
Then to a feild of warriors
where blades and axes sing
Through an enchanted forest
where a queen remains asleep
To the tower of a princess
where for love she chose to leap
Past an army of robots
who do battle on the plain
To the little boy inside me
who will forever dream of fame

My eyes regain their focus
and a smile splits my face
They tell me i'll not go far
but ive been to every place

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~

[This message has been edited by Blackdrake (edited 06-01-2001).]

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-05-31 01:35 AM

I am speachless at this poem! Remarkable!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-05-31 02:10 AM

have not most boys lived such adventures in their minds eye? Enjoyed going back through time awhile, thank you

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-05-31 02:51 AM

You certainly opened so many intricate passages into the mind with this writing....such imagination and yearning!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2001-05-31 10:26 AM

nicely done..enjoyed very much

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

RebeccaJoy
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 35

5 posted 2001-05-31 11:48 AM

This is outstanding. A very nice flow and full of imagery and emotion.

theLadypoet
Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 97
Or USA

6 posted 2001-05-31 12:12 PM

This is an incredible read. The only thing I
saw were spelling errors and one useage...but I'm compulsive/obsessive :=)

I read it over and over. It would make a
nice movie.

theLadypoet

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt

Blackdrake
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 83
Depends on the day :)

7 posted 2001-06-01 12:19 PM

Thank you all . Twas much fun writing this .

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~

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