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Open Poetry #14

Lost inside you

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2001-05-30 11:16 PM

Lost inside love
A thought never known
A feeling too hidden
Too hard to explain
Not thinking the way
Eyes too thorned to see
Lost inside Love
Taken from me
Visions of past
Happiness there
No chance to be taken
No glance or shared stare
All was together
Me and you there
Till the day you decided
Our love wasnt fair
Love for you to give
No you to give to
You took you away
And left me so blue
Lost inside love
Longing for you

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-05-30 11:46 PM

Nice, I like the last two lines..your theme/premise of this piece. good flow!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-05-31 03:53 AM

Sad but lovely poem of yearning feelings! Good work!

ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

3 posted 2001-05-31 05:15 AM

A place renowned for its unrivaled bliss and equivalent danger. Yet there are times the chance simply must be taken.

Thanks

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

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