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Open Poetry #14

Disappearances

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-05-30 06:33 PM

Disappearances…

The lonely heart of an illusionary soul
sequesters tenderness as the tides
draw back from the shoreline

with the sun drifting behind the clouds
your hand turns to sand in the palm of mine
spilling through my finger’s grasp

the caress of your voice, silent,
like sparrows in winter months
no longer solicits the sighs of my own

in the fading of spring’s full moon to crescent stage
the prairie’s nights have become dark
like the shadow on my heart…

Annie Lehberg
achildsheart
05-30-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-05-30 06:36 PM

Why the darkness? Nicely crafted, but somber.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-05-30 06:40 PM

I have lived this, it is a song of emotion that fits deep in my heart.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

3 posted 2001-05-30 08:20 PM

hmmm, the darkness really shows huh? haha.
I dont know. Just feelin gloomy I geuss.
Glad you liked it though.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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