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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2001-05-30 06:16 PM



My picture here disappeared and I can't get it back, so I submitted a second edition. This poem needs its picture so if you want the full treatment, look for number (2).


I won't describe her beauty
for nature shows  it so well
caught by a fling of sunlight
sets on my mind her spell

Just one flower at  the time
she is showing off I know
but how could one not love her
let beauty lasts ever so

So when you are in sorrow
please look deeply in her heart
and with her serene colour
she will heal your sorrow smart


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 05-30-2001).]

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Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
1 posted 2001-05-30 06:20 PM


absolutely beautiful photo an so is your poem
enjoyed it very much

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-05-30 06:22 PM


We share a love for flowers., this is wonderful.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-05-30 06:27 PM


The most fragile of lovely flowers.  Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Sven
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4 posted 2001-05-30 07:30 PM


she shows off so that we might know her. . .

excellent my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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5 posted 2001-07-03 03:43 PM


OH...but that's her job!!! I love this, Titia! Great work here.
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

6 posted 2001-07-03 03:44 PM


one bloom at a time...how well you've captured the gift of the flower....

[This message has been edited by Decaflame (edited 07-03-2001).]

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2001-07-03 03:45 PM


Thank you, Titia, you have no idea how much I needed this today.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
8 posted 2001-07-03 04:04 PM


A beautiful poem,  I can't locate the other posting that has the picture and I clicked on the link above and got nowhere.  But I did enjoy the poem!
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