Open Poetry #14 |
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What is it??? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) ![]() |
Driven wild by your way Caught desperately Deep within myself Seeing what I saw before Deepness uncaptured Uncaught not yeilding Throughout the corners Currents flowing by Glowing images unforeseen Oneness not existing Troubled mirroring Swallow the waves Talk of the known Meaning lost in language Usage beyond interpretation Listen closely Souls gripping Energies running parallel In-between multiple dimensions Thrashing rocking Wondrous time Constant struggle Binding together Soft whispers Instance wondering Natural rhythm of one Spelllbinding colors swirl Within our perplexed mind Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Soft whispers Instance wondering Natural rhythm of one Spelllbinding colors swirl Within our perplexed mind ======================== what is it??? me thinks its Chemistry ![]() loved the way this one builds in intensity... so nice to see your name here Blue...tis been a long time. take care jm We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enoyed this... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Sounds to me that you might have been angry about another, carrying that torture within and tormenting your mind. Good piece of writing, keep it up. Rick |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
frenzied. . . a dizzying pace with this one. . . nice to see you again my friend. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
what is it? lovely captivity of heart, is it not? |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Sounds like a chaos I know about but never actually experienced. You portrayed it well. The White Wolf If life is just a game, when does it end cause I want to get to what is real. |
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