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bluestem
New Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 6
rapid city, SD

0 posted 2001-05-30 06:06 PM

timepiece
tracking
footsteps
tick
and memory
tick
tick

restlessness
awakening
to the
tick tock
rhythm
a mechanized
cadence,
the march

of futility

clockwork world,
the pendulum

swift

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2001-05-30 06:09 PM

welcome to passions.

really enjoyed this one and look forward to seeing more

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy

ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

2 posted 2001-05-30 06:09 PM

very nice and thougtful minimalism.

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-30 06:35 PM

welcome to Passions, I enjoyed this very much.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-05-30 06:45 PM

I have family in Rapid City...and where I hail from, "bluestem" makes the state...

Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

RebeccaJoy
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 35

5 posted 2001-05-30 08:41 PM

I enjoyed this style very much. Welcome, from one newcomer to another!

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

6 posted 2001-05-31 05:05 PM

bluestem, love your style. Welcome and keep up the great work. ME

JCGF
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 72
MA

7 posted 2001-06-01 01:00 PM

Welcome and thanks for the read. I enjoyed this.

Hugs,
Tammy

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

8 posted 2001-06-02 09:01 AM

Hi Bluestem,

Welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay, this is a wonderful entry hope to see more of your work.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2001-06-02 09:45 AM

Welcome to the family!! I look forward to reading more from you.

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

10 posted 2001-06-04 10:06 PM

Welcome indeed bluestem. I too like your style, i think ee would approve. I most definately look forward to more.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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