Rainbow Heights (double acrostic)

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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-05-30 05:12 PM

Rainbow Heights

Rainbow sky blooming high
a dream's aurora in the eye
inhale garish beauty multi
nuanced stratas expanding
befalling all within a sigh
of the opening soaring heart
with wings to rainbow heights

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-05-30 05:13 PM

Please, please quit making these look so darn easy!

Bravo!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-30 05:22 PM

you keep doing these and I'm gonna have to try them! I don't think I have enough Advil for that!! LOL These are wonderful!

SEA

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-30 05:28 PM

Bet you're one of those people who says they can't even draw a straight line, huh? Loved this!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-30 06:30 PM

very talented

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-05-30 06:30 PM

Incredible!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2001-05-30 06:47 PM

Good job..beautifully done..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

7 posted 2001-05-31 05:46 AM

Oh is this nice. I am so very fond of Acrostic form. Nice job, very nice.

Thanks

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-05-31 05:54 AM

outstanding acrostic rainbow

((hugs))
Charisma

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

9 posted 2001-05-31 07:15 AM

That's a marvellous peace. Never tried doubles myself. Love it

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2001-05-31 07:22 AM

Beautifully and cleverly done!  These lines I like the flow of....

               "befalling all within a sigh
                of the opening soaring heart
                with wings to rainbow heights."

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

11 posted 2001-05-31 08:59 AM

Wow...a tough challange you gave yourself here and you flourished in both form and content....nicely done

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

12 posted 2001-06-01 01:54 AM

Decaflame--

They getting easier the more you do...thanks for your stopping by.

SEA--I hope you do...Thank you.

JLR--Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

Irish Rose--Thank you.

Interloper--Thank you for your kind comment.

Victoria--Thank you.  Glad you liked this.

ArticulatedSigh--Thanks for reading and for kind reply.

Charisma--Glad you enjoyed.  Thank you.

Titia

Thank you

ethome--Thanks. Always appreciate your kind comments.

Hoot-Glad you good fly by. Thank you

take care,
Poeminister

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

13 posted 2001-06-06 07:25 AM

Poeminister-YOU ROCK

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

14 posted 2001-06-06 12:18 PM

Thank you Watersign, and you do too

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