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Open Poetry #14

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RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2001-05-30 01:29 PM

Meniscus

Concave?
Convex?
The answer rests
Upon the sides,
Though I supsect
The tension lies
Beneath the surface.

RMW

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-05-30 01:32 PM

I would suspect that as well....

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 05-30-2001).]

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

2 posted 2001-05-30 01:33 PM

RMW- super! Panne

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2001-05-30 02:30 PM

Bob..just the reflection of a smile you make.

PS--you made me look up a word and that's a good thing.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-05-30 02:50 PM

very clever!

ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

5 posted 2001-05-30 02:53 PM

This is well done Minimalism.

Yet if i recall tis the Surface tension keeps us afloat.

I did enjoy your write.

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2001-05-30 04:15 PM

Ahh, a silver sliver of a moon
revealing only what
she wants
us to
see.

Wonderful poem, Bob.

Cor

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-05-30 06:41 PM

I belive it does, by golly

Well done, Bob.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2001-06-13 02:28 PM

Oh I agree... the tension lies beneath the surface...

as always an insight from your words..

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