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Wings of Night......Tanka
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Wings of Night......Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 photo: ©2001 Donna Gerardi Wings of Night. Touch of romantic Whispers of melting sunlight slowly vaporized when darkness flowing gently covered earth with wings of night. Charisma ~*TMP*~ 30/05/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 05-30-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful Charisma! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a flow of words and a lovely picture to go with it. Kathleen Blake |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A lovely write, Charisma.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is just lovely! I think I should get out my "Poetry for Dummies" and learn how to write a Tanka. I have never tried it, but this is beautiful and very effective Liz |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this feels like the comfort chicks must experience beneath the protection of their mother's wings...great analogy to be able to look at night/darkness as such I'm sure there are many times when the cover of darkness is a protection rather than a fear of what can not be seen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely vision to behold. Beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Charisma...James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you did this so soft....  very pretty Charisma! SEA |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Mmmmmmmm.....nice....nice...yessssss! Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow. Well done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you do these so well. . . I'm always amazed. . . right now is no exception. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all for reading and your lovely comments. I am very glad that you like this little tanka. love you all Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous visions you paint with your words, the sunrise and sunset to me are the most dazzling visions of nature! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is dazzling! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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