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SEA
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0 posted 2001-06-05 07:44 PM





song comes on the radio
and I am taken away
the visions swirl around in my heart
and memories make their way out
in the form of tears
remembering your smile
your laughter
your love
I fly through time
To when we were together
And I can’t help but to wonder
Where you are
How you are
And if you remember me
The way I remember you
With tender fondness
And a quiet unspoken knowledge
That this love from yesterday
Remains
Safe
On the beaches of my heart

~SEA~


If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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1 posted 2001-06-05 07:54 PM


Oh, so very touching and beautiful...the picture is so cool also. Loved this!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
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I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Watersign6
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2 posted 2001-06-05 07:56 PM


i love this SEA  
Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-06-05 08:05 PM


Sweet memories flowing.  Beautiful!

Poeminister

"There is no remedy for love but to love more."
--Henry David Thoreau

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-05-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-06-05 08:15 PM


SEA~
Yes - yes - yes !

'this love from yesterday
Remains
Safe'


Now ... who's reading whose heart ??????
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-06-05 08:24 PM


Saunni~ thank you very much  

Watersign6~ that makes me feel very good, thank you  

PM~   you warm my heart, thank you  

Marge~ kindred spirits my sweet friend   thank you

~SEA

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6 posted 2001-06-05 08:27 PM


This is lovely, SEA! Beautifully done!
SEA
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Denise~   thank you so much   ~SEA
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8 posted 2001-06-06 12:14 PM


This is soooooo moving, yet quiet and peaceful. One could hear the ocean waves cresting upon the sand.
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9 posted 2001-06-06 12:19 PM


arent walks on the beach wonderful?
ps-- so is this  

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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10 posted 2001-06-06 12:24 PM


Safe
On the beaches of my heart""

my precious memories remain there, thank you for reminding me....I LOVE this!  


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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11 posted 2001-06-06 12:32 PM


With tender fondness
And a quiet unspoken knowledge
That this love from yesterday
Remains
Safe
On the beaches of my heart
================================

what a very cool turn of phrase ...
this is written so soft...like a whisper on the wind...
beautiful Sea...
print this out and float it out to Sea ...
you know...message in a bottle  

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

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12 posted 2001-06-06 06:38 AM


SEA~
Most wonderful work with beautiful flowing words... and feel

Regards,
Sudhir

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13 posted 2001-06-06 07:32 AM


Sea such sweet melancholy you've woven here....love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

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14 posted 2001-06-06 09:08 AM


LP~ that is so sweet of you   thanks

Jamie~ yes, my favorite thing to do   thank you  

Lauren~thank you very much  

Janet~ Thanks my sweet friend, most kind of you  

Sudhir lyer~ thank you for reading  

Charisma~ Thank you for the love it and hugs  

~SEA


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Deep in the heart
15 posted 2001-06-07 09:38 AM


I almost missed this ... glad I didn't.
I can't think of many more lovely places than the "beaches of your heart."

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16 posted 2001-06-07 01:03 PM


now this is the place to be. . .

excellent. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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17 posted 2001-06-07 01:44 PM


The gift of love.  This is excellent!
OLIAS
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18 posted 2001-06-07 02:28 PM


Wonderful words much enjoyed, Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

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19 posted 2001-06-07 05:29 PM


You go girl!...this love remains safe on the beaches of my heart...

-Captivated:-)

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20 posted 2001-06-07 06:12 PM


Wonderful expression...James
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21 posted 2001-06-07 06:48 PM


Such a beautiful piece SEA!
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22 posted 2002-03-23 07:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, may true love forever sing to your heart and may your memories forever shine with loves happiness and have your heart resting in paradise! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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