Open Poetry #14 |
On The Beaches Of My Heart................ |
SEA
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song comes on the radio and I am taken away the visions swirl around in my heart and memories make their way out in the form of tears remembering your smile your laughter your love I fly through time To when we were together And I can’t help but to wonder Where you are How you are And if you remember me The way I remember you With tender fondness And a quiet unspoken knowledge That this love from yesterday Remains Safe On the beaches of my heart ~SEA~ If I let you into my heart..... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, so very touching and beautiful...the picture is so cool also. Loved this! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i love this SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sweet memories flowing. Beautiful! Poeminister "There is no remedy for love but to love more." --Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Yes - yes - yes ! 'this love from yesterday Remains Safe' Now ... who's reading whose heart ?????? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Saunni~ thank you very much Watersign6~ that makes me feel very good, thank you PM~ you warm my heart, thank you Marge~ kindred spirits my sweet friend thank you ~SEA |
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Denise
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This is lovely, SEA! Beautifully done! |
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SEA
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Denise~ thank you so much ~SEA |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
This is soooooo moving, yet quiet and peaceful. One could hear the ocean waves cresting upon the sand. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
arent walks on the beach wonderful? ps-- so is this There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Safe On the beaches of my heart"" my precious memories remain there, thank you for reminding me....I LOVE this! Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With tender fondness And a quiet unspoken knowledge That this love from yesterday Remains Safe On the beaches of my heart ================================ what a very cool turn of phrase ... this is written so soft...like a whisper on the wind... beautiful Sea... print this out and float it out to Sea ... you know...message in a bottle she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
SEA~ Most wonderful work with beautiful flowing words... and feel Regards, Sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea such sweet melancholy you've woven here....love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
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LP~ that is so sweet of you thanks Jamie~ yes, my favorite thing to do thank you Lauren~thank you very much Janet~ Thanks my sweet friend, most kind of you Sudhir lyer~ thank you for reading Charisma~ Thank you for the love it and hugs ~SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost missed this ... glad I didn't. I can't think of many more lovely places than the "beaches of your heart." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is the place to be. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
The gift of love. This is excellent! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful words much enjoyed, Thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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Captivating1 Junior Member
since 2001-06-07
Posts 15Houston, TX |
You go girl!...this love remains safe on the beaches of my heart... -Captivated:-) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful expression...James |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Such a beautiful piece SEA! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, may true love forever sing to your heart and may your memories forever shine with loves happiness and have your heart resting in paradise! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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