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Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-20 01:04 PM

desert sunshine blooms
lost in rock and windblown sand
thistle meets the sun

Graphics: Picture.com

"I am not now that which I have been."

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-20 01:19 PM

It's perfect, just perfect, both the picture and the verse.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-05-20 01:28 PM

Thank you Irish Rose. Short forms are truly my favorite genre.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-05-20 01:39 PM

and you do them very well Julian. . .

well written. . .

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Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-05-20 02:04 PM

Sven: thank you so very much.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-05-20 04:34 PM

Julian~
Such lovely inspirational thoughts.

Desert sun now sets
Passion flower's petals close
Holding warmth within

Thank you for sharing.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

6 posted 2001-05-20 04:36 PM

Julian,

Ohhh how I love haiku! This is just simply wonderful

TaraB

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

7 posted 2001-05-20 05:08 PM

Thank you!! May your Sunday hold nothing but sunshine.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-05-21 01:36 AM

This was simply picture perfect poetry! The desert of course is my favorite place in the entire world, and you captured the beauty perfectly.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
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poni
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 21
Nebraska

9 posted 2001-05-21 01:39 AM

how beautiful...needed the suns warmth today...smiles

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

10 posted 2001-05-21 01:41 AM

Lovely haiku ...very nicely done.

Poeminister

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

11 posted 2001-05-21 06:21 AM

Thanks to all - I am so pleased thee sun shown your direction.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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