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Rainbow in a dew drop .
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Rainbow in a dew drop . |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Rainbow in a dew drop . As I sit here on the phone, I look down to the grass, And then in a sweat moment, A rainbow appeared so fast . I look down and see the glint, The spectrum in the dew, And as I sway a little, It would glint from red through blue . How strange is this ? A rainbow in the grass, I’ve seen a rainbow in the skies, And even in a glass . But a rainbow in the grass bellow, So beautiful and clear, I look at this and I feel such joy, I even shed a tear . Why can’t everything be like this ? Full of beauty and of pride, Why does life all suck so much ? When there’s rainbows far and wide . Written by Tom Baker .© 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. [This message has been edited by angelswing (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
hey Angelswing,love this one so so much  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..what a lovely picture you paint with your words!!  |
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zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
life can be hard but its these simple joys, such as your rainbow, that make it all worth while good defeats bad joy defeats sorrow lovely poem it reminds me to keep up the fight |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
angelswing- Beautiful write and image. Nicley penned. PM |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Keep looking for those rainbows and you will overlook the dismal things in life. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you for these wonderful rainbow in a dew drop. I could see the rainbow and enjoy this gift of nature very much. rainbow thread to my library. Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the imagery is insightful, nice read here. Kathleen Blake |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, brilliant - thank you all, I never expected this many replies, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it . I remember the moment well, and all the time before and not even since have I seen something quite so beutiful, it was inspiring . Thanks for your kind words of support . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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