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In A Storm Of Silent Tears
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In A Storm Of Silent Tears |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* In A Storm Of Silent Tears *~In a storm of silent tears, I stroll along silently, slowly, Shuffling my heart through the rain. I freeze amidst the biting, cruel, Crystalline droplets, Of everlasting life. Seeking nourishment From heaven and earth. I am so miniscule, In the scheme of things. Among the thirsting trees, Flowers, fields, mountains, Rivers and oceans. My mind's thoughts, Flow downstream in sluices, So very paralytic, Is this cold, And ever flowing, Sad train of thought. I repeat the same verse or rhyme, A common chronograph, The entire universe, Of sad souls everywhere share. The same words, like drops of rain, Falling down in a stream of "why?" I taste salt through the rain, I wonder how hearts are fractured. And suddenly I feel the salt sting, I flinch, as I can suddenly feel, My hollow, and empty heart. The droplets fall softly first, Streaming down like my past, Floating as on wings, Then begins beating like a drum, Now drop-by-drop, by drop, Each rivulet reflects the past. My thoughts, now cascade, In raging torrents, Flowing from a heart so cold, And slowly I walk on unnoticed, In a storm of silent tears. ~*~  art: "Rainmaker" ~www.allwallcom~ music: "Me Tuk Wea Syn" - Elan Michaels ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Mysteria this is so moving an inspirational an very very spiritual to me  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Interloper ~ Watersign6 ~*~ so glad you enjoyed this little dittie! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Mysteria How much I could relate to this poem today, it certainly touched my soul.......Sue Suetang |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"I taste salt in the rain" very powerful, with so much emotion....nice write Mysteria~ Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Dang it, Mysteria: I told you we be having acid rain! Lovely poem and excellent graphics. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Suetang ~ If you can relate to this poem, I wish to give both you and your soul a hug today, mauhhhh! Greeneyes ~ Thank you for your kind comments. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Wow...Now you've done it...I'm wiping tears and how I can so relate to every verse in this message, Sharon. This was so beautiful, and touched my heart so deeply... ~*~sighs~*~.....very, very lovely.... Hugs and smiles to you, dawn |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwww i've lost my words in awe. Wonderful, inspirational piece you've weaven here. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dawn: I am definitely going to buy you a year's supply of kleenix for your birthday, that migth last you 3 months! Thanks sweetie. Charisma: I am so glad you found this enlightening, I had hoped for that. Thank you. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
You know I love your poems of poetry, both visually and its' words. I take them with me always. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The old ones nodded their heads in approval of your inner spirit...I shake mine in awe..very well done....gentle smile |
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WhiteOnyx New Member
since 2001-05-07
Posts 9New Zealand |
Not only a great poem, but a cool picture! Candy for the eyes and the soul...what more could I ask for? WhiteOnyx |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Latin passion: you just made my day! You carry me with you (that makes me sound model thin!) love it! Logan: Thank you for your kind approval, I appreciate it. White Onyx: I trul appreciate your kind praise thank you from Canada! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautiful..and i love the music too nicely done~Victoria~
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
Awesome !!! Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is cool!! A fabulous write! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Victoria ~ Blackdrake ~ Saunni ~ I am so very glad you all liked this piece and thank you all for your time in reading it. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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