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MOO MOO!!!!!!!!!! (All of the cows)
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MOO MOO!!!!!!!!!! (All of the cows) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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All of the cows are smarter than us, preachers and prophets are these bovine heirs. Mooing mute mayhem from their pulpits of excrement. All the cows are knowledge unbound, a microcosm of man, the vacant eyed consumer producing only bile fluids same ingredients the simian digest: talk show host and soap opera queen. The fountain of life attained from a leak sprung tap, still they hesitate until their benevolent cannibal gods leave. The panic and the poison, paranoia in their eyes. All of the cows are smarter than us, When F&M descends They would immunise Not sentence themselves to the death camps. All of the cows are smarter than us coated in dirt, littered with flies how sweet their sacrifice stewing oven juice. How then that these intellectual icons never foresee the abattoir? "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
MOO MOO indeed! Loved this brian...both interesting AND deep and light hearted too!  (okay, I'm going, I'M GOING...LOL)  Hugs to you, my friend! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Having led me directly to Webster, I salute your mastery of vocab... well done Sir! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
all the while I was reading this I was thinking...'until they have mad-cow disease' and then you brought foot and mouth into the piece...so maybe they've already gone mad. the last statement, though, certainly offers food for thought |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
MOO MOO back Serenity, oh deep..lol you kidder. Thanks for your reply and for noting the sarcasm. Decaflame, I am blushing red.... you are far too kind. Vas, you noticed the Foot and mouth reference. Just to clarify Ireland is now safe to enter we just changed the date of our St Patrick's parade to keep out all the other countries lol kidding of course. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
Very nicely said forget the sheep analogy let it be bovine instead much better eating Please know where the inspiration lies should you see a poat called "Slaghter Houee Jive" |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I found this very interesting and almost funny despite the sadness. Poor generous cows, but of course you are kidding about their intelligence. Good job. Joyce |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
it is always a pleasure to hear from death and live to tell the tale Vas, thank you for your kind comments "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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