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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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No Words Tomorrow we will touch the softest petals of forever We will wade in the waters edge along the shores of silence And fly the course of summer birds to places of contentment We will sit on the greenest hillside of togetherness We will join the stars and moons in the heavens of peace becoming one with the glimmering night sky We will climb the mountain of life’s greatest pleasures And there I will give you my heart completely As the winds spread the fragrance of our joy to far places And the earth sings out the glory of our love Never again will spring forests know such sweetness Never again will fields become more radiant with colorful bloom Never again will love find such depths in the eyes of desire Though I cannot find the words to tell you of this love They are waiting to be said, oh so sweetly, in the tenderness of a kiss Elizabeth Santos |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh and there are NO WORDS for the emotion this tugs from me...you have penned a beauty Lady Liz |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
cool |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful imagery and well written emotions  i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-29-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Absolutely fabulous write Elizabeth! These words are pure poetry......... "Never again will spring forests know such sweetness Never again will fields become more radiant with colorful bloom Never again will love find such depths in the eyes of desire Though I cannot find the words to tell you of this love They are waiting to be said, oh so sweetly, in the tenderness of a kiss" Oh so heart and soul! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ When the heart speaks such lovely thoughts - there is no need for other words. Lovely ! *Hugs n' Happiness* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Liz~ so tranquil, so beautiful ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Paula, You touch me with your comments JBaker, Thanks, dear Albert, Thank you for your remarks Ethome, Thank you, dear poet. You make my little heart beat with joy Marge, Words from your heart are most appreciated. Thank you, sweet one Liz |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well-- these words come pretty close... they remind me of a whisper,, and you know what they say about whispering... There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful poetry, and yes, a kiss says it all sometimes doesn't it? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Amen is all I can say. Sy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This filled me with such a feeling of peace, thank you, Elizabeth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sheer bliss.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you have never needed words my friend. . . superb. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Elizabeth: A wonderful expression of tender feelings. I do enjoy your poetry!! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your comments, though I don't really know what they say about whispering. Your words are so kind Liz |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Who need words.....with poetry like this....it speaks volume. excellent penned. Charisma |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Isn't love such a pretty thing? There are so many words to express this emotion and yet words are never quite adequate, are they? Beautifully done, my friend. Michael Proust- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh My..so lovely! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
you are going into my favorite poets library love this sooo much |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice,liz It been a long I've read your poem |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful expression of the tenderness of love and caring and the action imparted thru a kiss...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I deeply appreciate all of your comments. Thank you, watersign for finding this somewhere and for wanting to keep it Liz |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
pssst... Liz... come a bit closer..it is said if you want somebody's attention whisper There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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