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The martyr, Love
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The martyr, Love |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
The rain mixed in with my tears. I peeked outside the window, as you walked away. Only then, realizing my pain. Forcing you to pack and leave. Too many sacrifices for me. Love should not hurt like this. I had to be strong for me. I was not willing to admit, that maybe I had something to do with it. That love can wither away. That love should be unconditional. That love should be romantized, not dramatized. That one should love the other person, as one wants to be loved. That one should not expect anything if it is true love. The rain mixed in with my tears made me comprehend that if I suffer with your love, without you I would suffer more. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
how utterly sad! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and so. . . which suffering do we take as less painful? well written walker. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
walker this is a sad one but very very good  |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Love should not hurt. I wish you have happier dreams - good poem. |
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