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Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

0 posted 2001-05-27 06:32 PM

The World Aint Over Yet

Liers,thieves,hypocrites
lawyers,cons,deficeits
politicians,congressmen,presidents
an the world aint over yet
better find something to believe in
give it your best
put yourself to the test
cuz the world aint over yet
the I.R.S an Uncle Sam
unforgiveable acts of
the Klu,Klux,Klan
kids in gangs
trying to rule the land
an we're still making guns
an putting them in thier hands
when they have easy access to them
this I just dont understand
unreasonable people
doing unbelievable things
we keep buying all these weapons
so that we're massively armed for war
when we should be using this money
to help the homeless an poor
cuz there are so many people struggling
all over this world
this is the kind of **** i can't forget
this is the kind of **** i can't take no more
an the world aint over yet
better find something to believe in
give it your best
live your life to the fullest
cuz the world aint over yet

(c)Kelli Kay

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2001-05-27 10:45 PM

hey....this is fantastic!!!!!!! What the heck is this doing way back here, I'll never know!! Great read, and it makes me want to just GET BUSY, and stop letting everybody else think for me........you are good, and I hope to run into you more often here!!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-28 12:01 PM

Awesome read. Let me see a hammer cost $30,000. enjoyed.

pamela08
Junior Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 27
California,USA

3 posted 2001-05-28 12:19 PM

very well said...you have a way with words i hope to read more of your poetry

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-05-28 07:46 AM

SunnyOne..thank you,glad i could give someone something new to read

Latin..thank you for the comment

Pamela..thanks,glad to know my poems are being well received by others here

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-05-29 12:21 PM

Thoughtful...well done!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-05-29 06:15 AM

Love all the thoughts in this one. Thought provoking review of life! I really enjoyed the common sense value in this piece!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-05-29 06:19 AM

The world may not be over but we are setting ourselves up...James

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

8 posted 2001-05-29 06:50 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem an comment on it,its deeply appreciated

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-05-30 06:55 PM

that's right it's not over yet!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

10 posted 2001-05-30 06:57 PM

Right on!

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

11 posted 2001-05-31 07:35 AM

thank you all an if i an good for one thing
it is common sense-LOL!

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