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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-05-27 04:22 PM

Sorry I Have To Go

Oh how I loved the time I spent with
such a beautiful woman as she.
Her tender heart touched me so.
Her soft kisses warmed my soul.
She's all that I want
and all that I need.
And yet she's running away from me.
Go sweet angel.
Fly away.
I know that most will go
while only a few will stay.
I remain thankful
we had our day.

Jameslee@May27,2001

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-05-27 04:28 PM

I like this, James....

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-05-27 04:49 PM

tittle pulled me in, as I thought you would leave passions...pfffff glad you don't.

enjoyed your poem as I always do.

((hugs))
Charisma

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

3 posted 2001-05-27 04:53 PM

what a heart touching poem,really enjoyed it
James

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-05-27 04:53 PM

Same with me here. Sorry that your friend had to go, but I'm glad you'll stay with us.
Beautiful poem by the way.

Titia

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-05-27 08:11 PM

very nice james...nicely done..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-05-27 09:06 PM

James, it's time to stop trying to hold on to things that aren't there and to start looking for what is. . .

excellent words. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2001-06-01 02:06 AM

Sigh...you always have me my sweetest friend

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

8 posted 2001-06-02 08:48 AM

Hi JamesMichael,

This is beautifully sad, sometimes love is so elusive, but I have to say that I am so glad it is not you going, I cherish are small moments of sharing in the beauty of poetry togethter, some day you are going to make someone a wonderful husband,I just know it.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

9 posted 2001-06-02 10:29 AM

Yes, you had me worried for a minute, too...I am glad to see this isn't what I thought. Sad poem, but nicely written, James...

sp

everytime I close my eyes,
I see your face,
I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize
that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-06-02 12:33 PM

Sometimes the memories are our treasure when goodbye comes. This is so sad

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2001-06-02 12:34 PM

That may be so James but the few that stay...they are more than precious....good piece to read I enjoyed!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2001-06-05 03:31 AM

I really appreciate you reading and responding Sunshine, Charisma, Watersign, Titia, Victoria, Sven, Paula, Cerenity, Snowpants, Irish Rose and Ethome.
Paula thanks for being so sweet to me.
Cerenity I hope that someday is a soon day...James

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

13 posted 2001-07-03 01:09 AM

James, your poem just grabbed hold of my heart...

Great writing PoetFriend...
Hugs2U
*~coco~*

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

14 posted 2001-07-03 11:47 AM

You are masterful in "photographing" feelings with very little "film"... feelings, I might add, to which it seems most of us can relate. I hope that special lady finds you and appreciates you for who you are...

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

15 posted 2001-07-03 11:51 AM

Another great one! Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

16 posted 2001-07-10 10:57 PM

James,

I too was pulled in because I thought you were saying good-bye to passions. I'm glad I was wrong.. your heartfelt and sweet words would be sorely missed. I am sorry for your loss.. but as you said.. be thankful for the time you had and head toward the future.

TaraB

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 07-10-2001).]

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