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Every Rose Has It's Thorn (final post ever)
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Every Rose Has It's Thorn (final post ever) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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This poem has been removed. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sad to see a poet that can write so well leave the rest of us. This is excellent writing! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jesse, My heart bleeds for you, it's sad to see you go. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jesse so sorry that you had to be broken up like this love. Its not fair its not right but it's life, and believe me you will rise again truly you will love. Don't go too far away, maybe you will find solace in writing, I know I did. If this is the last time I ever see your name I shall be sorry. You are a fine writer Take care love and warm stuff Mushy  May He guide you and I pray He will keep you safe Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This isnt the first time you have been thru this jesse...time heals everything..and you should concentrate on your writing..but i know how you feel HUGS ~Victoria~
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
most return when they heal, you will.... Kathleen Blake |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Say it ain't so!  Don't let her stop you from writing and entertaining us. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey Jesse she just wasn't the right one for you...and that is a continual journey...to find a kindred spirit...looks like you're in the same boat as me...it always seems to be the next one...sorry it had to be like that for you this time...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Jesse, I remember when you joined Passions, just a couple days after I did. You wandered in the Dark forum with your heart on your sleeve, back then you were nursing that broken heart and we watched you do so and heal through your poetry and giving yourself time to grow. My point is... back then you thought you would never love again....and in time you did... and gentle poet...you will again... a very wise person once said... "Never say Never" take all the time you need...heal in your writing, whether you post it any where or not... a poet is so because we write...not because we post in cyberspace. I'm sorry your hurting like this... and we see this time and time again on the internet... its a hard lesson we ALL will learn in some way at one time or another.Its when we dont learn from the pain...that we will be hurt time and time again. Trust me...Im a moth...I know. Take care of you JM I'm hanging on your every word |
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Sweeetsuz Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 770Fresno CA. |
Full of imagery and pain Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Jesse...life has it's disappointments and almost all on here have had their share of them. Sometimes what one feels is love may have been the kind that was needed at the time and you were not used but were the support, the shoulder, that met the emotional needs of another. I even enjoyed the way you said this "you said that you needed time for your heart to heal" ...this may have felt like a lie to you but it seems to have been said in a caring way so as not to hurt you...even if it did. I am sorry you will leave us with a loss of your words...they are after all, what is important on here...and all else on this site is secondary next to the pleasure we all receive from reading and sharing and understanding the emotions we all go through. Best wishes in whatever you decide.. ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
"Whatever happens, I'll leave it all to chance Another heartache, another failed romance On and on, does anybody know what we are living for ? I guess I'm learning (I'm learning learning learning) I must be warmer now I'll soon be turning (turning turning turning) Round the corner now Outside the dawn is breaking But inside in the dark I'm aching to be free The show must go on The show must go on, yeah yeah Ooh, inside my heart is breaking My make-up may be flaking But my smile still stays on" I'm really into Queen now and this song has helped me through tough times. Hope it does the same for you, it's very powerful I think. Good Luck, on with the show... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jesse, this is a heartfelt poem, and I am sorry to hear the words that show how broken your heart is. Don't give up, hun, life is horrid sometimes, and you know I have been there. But another miracle may be around the corner. I hope you keep writing, I believe it will help. Sandra |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
JES!!! i havent even read the poem yet..(i want to!! but i'm being rushed out the door!) but before i get rushed out..i just want to say.....dont let someone else rule your world! you are the angel that flies with your wings baby..only you can dictate where you fly...so fly in freedom, and if you choose to fly away, we'll miss you. if you choose to fly circles around she who tries to break you, we'll cheer for you!! i wish you'd stay, jes...  , g the boy said, my name's johnny |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
sad that you're leaving us,but enjoy your poem as well  |
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