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when i whisper
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when i whisper |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i whisper... so as not to be heard i whisper the secrets of my heart i whisper so you wont run away i whisper... and you hear-- you hear the things i didnt want to say you hear the secrets i try so to hide you hear... and still you stay a little longer you hear me when i whisper... -dgvarner 10-12-00 |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I feel like this is something I should have written. I so can relate. You did a great job writing this.  Sauni Sauni :) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ This lady likes these thoughts~ 'you hear... and still you stay a little longer' Good to see you, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I like this alot! enjoyed reading! *smiles* ~Tier |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
When you whisper...it is poetry! |
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pamela08 Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 27California,USA |
your poem is very powerful and right to the point the line: "i whisper so you wont run away" is a great line tracy pamela rios |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hey sweets, this is very good. I just comes across just like the whisper... Whisper some more to me... please. Parker |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Love the twist in this, dg. And a nicely open ending too, I like that. Krawdad |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SAUNNI..thanks a bunch MARGIE..glad you liked, my florida friend TIERSDIN..thanks for the *smile*..glad you enjoyed JLR..thanks! what a cool compliment  PAMELA..glad you liked that line..its a big truth line PARKER..come a little close baby..you know i'll whisper all you want...  KRAW..hey, good to see you glad you liked this one..(i'm still gonna get into DARK to read YOUR stuff i've missed..! )hugs! g the boy said, my name's johnny |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
really marvelous poem an it was a joy to read |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
some of the best words are whispers "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I hear ya! Kathleen Blake |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I sure hear you, even when you whisper. Great poem, thanks, Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Beautiful! Even though you only whispered the secrets of your heart into these words, I "heard" them loud and clear. :-) Whisper some more :-) Well done! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WATERSIGN..thanks so much! BRIAN..yes.. i believe so too..IRISH..hey thanks for stopping in! TITIA..thanks for reading! RASCAL..if you'd stick around a little longer at a time..perhaps you'd get some more whispers... thanks for reading hugs, g the boy said, my name's johnny |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- i hear you... i'm loving this one!  my goodness, i've missed reading you... i've got alot of catching up to do.. love and hugs and stuff, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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