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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-26 04:30 PM

Can’t Read Your Mind

I wish that I could read your mind
the words I searched for, I could not find
sounds became a confusing phrase
passed me by, I turned the page
is it my lack of understanding of words in motion
or was it I felt they lacked any true emotion
and is it, letting go the risk you fear
that all real words fell silent or never clear
so I became confused by you
never knowing where to turn or what to do
yes, I wish that I could read your mind
within it, maybe the truth I’d find
but it could be done in clear words you say
they set the path and show the way
it is now not the time to question why
that a hello would be a good bye
this, is the only truth I know tonight
I lit the candle, you blew out the light

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-05-26 05:17 PM

OneSlickLady~

'this, is the only truth I know tonight
I lit the candle, you blew out the light'

Oh ... I like that !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-05-26 05:34 PM

Absolutely a wonderful write.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-05-26 06:20 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-26 08:20 PM

the feelings here are well shown. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-05-26 08:35 PM

really love your poem 1slick lady

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2001-05-26 08:59 PM

Beautiful!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-05-26 11:35 PM

this touched my heart

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-05-21 01:12 PM

touching piece

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