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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-05-26 10:03 AM

I wish we could listen to the rain together
dripping from the brow of the night
why am i thirsty for your soft kiss?
starving, craving sweet food of your lips

Your whisper bathed in my passion
crawled over my alabaster skin
each soft word ignited my heart
like a bell i chimed from deep within

The petals of the night will bloom again
and upon the stem of the morn
you were my bird of paradise
blooming on the wings of love born

Why do i feel like a tropical plant?
a wilting plant, without a bloom tonight

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 05-26-2001).]

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

1 posted 2001-05-26 10:59 AM

i enjoy your poem,very well written an much feeling an passion,really great poem

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-05-26 01:32 PM

Beautiful descriptions and flow in this piece. Excellent writing.

Poeminister

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-05-26 06:49 PM

Oh Victoria this is so nice...I nominate you for my favorite poet of the month...James

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-05-26 07:19 PM

Really nice, thanks

Titia

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-05-26 08:17 PM

Victoria, you have just written my thoughts. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-05-26 08:55 PM

Victoria~

'Your whisper bathed in my passion
crawled over my alabaster skin
each soft word ignited my heart
like a bell i chimed from deep within'

Very nicely pealed thoughts !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2001-05-26 09:59 PM

watersign6..thank you very much..
thank you for visiting

poeminister...thank you ..im so happy
you enjoyed my words

James...Oh my..i dont know what to say..so
i will just say thank you dear James

Titia..I am glad you enjoyed..thank you
for peeking in tonight..

sven..Have I really..well thanks sven
im glad you can relate

Marge..Thank you Marge...always nice hearing from you

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-04 09:09 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever spread your hearts wings of love and be nurtured like the rain on the tropical plant of your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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