Open Poetry #14 |
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Stem of the Morn |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869![]() |
I wish we could listen to the rain together dripping from the brow of the night why am i thirsty for your soft kiss? starving, craving sweet food of your lips Your whisper bathed in my passion crawled over my alabaster skin each soft word ignited my heart like a bell i chimed from deep within The petals of the night will bloom again and upon the stem of the morn you were my bird of paradise blooming on the wings of love born Why do i feel like a tropical plant? a wilting plant, without a bloom tonight Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 05-26-2001).] |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i enjoy your poem,very well written an much feeling an passion,really great poem ![]() |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful descriptions and flow in this piece. Excellent writing. Poeminister |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh Victoria this is so nice...I nominate you for my favorite poet of the month...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Really nice, thanks Titia |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Victoria, you have just written my thoughts. . . excellent. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ 'Your whisper bathed in my passion crawled over my alabaster skin each soft word ignited my heart like a bell i chimed from deep within' Very nicely pealed thoughts ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
watersign6..thank you very much.. thank you for visiting ![]() poeminister...thank you ..im so happy you enjoyed my words ![]() James...Oh my..i dont know what to say..so i will just say thank you dear James ![]() Titia..I am glad you enjoyed..thank you for peeking in tonight.. ![]() sven..Have I really..well thanks sven im glad you can relate ![]() Marge..Thank you Marge...always nice hearing from you ![]() ~Victoria~
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever spread your hearts wings of love and be nurtured like the rain on the tropical plant of your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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