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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Burnt smoke rises ashes fly a product of blaze you can not deny how quickly kindling feed a spark dries wet fueled feelings exploding need emotions flare fire hot deep within burns slow where cold has been too soon we learn painful truth in touch of glow fire burns "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This I liked muchly, as it reminds me of one my favorite poems--"the lesson of the moth" By Don Marquis...it's an interesting read, if you can't find it, I'd be happy to send it. |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Once you've been burned it's hard to get over. Time heals everything, remember that. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Out of the ashes, the phoenix will rise  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes in touch of glow fire does burn...well written! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done! hard, once burnt to reach out again, but time does help.... As usual, I enjoyed the read a great deal! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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