Open Poetry #14 |
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Indulgence |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
Let me sip a dream of you from this fragile cup. Let me see your face in the bold boil of storm clouds. Send the wind, my darling love,to whisper your sweet name in my ear. Let us lie down in silky-dark bowers and indulge our senses in the riot of passion that does grip us so. Then, thus entwined, will your heart beat in rhythm with those plaintive cries of ecstacy that tremble so, And they shall be the bow that strokes the strings of my winged instrument to bring forth the floods of joy. Again and again, we shall slip away from the world … in a tangle of lips, a bondage of flesh shall carry our song to sing above the stars. "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Roosevelt [This message has been edited by theLadypoet (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very interesting work..passionate and strong in emotional content...and determination... I enjoyed |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Enjoyable read. I would suggest if you are going to use "thee" in place of "you," then use "thy" or "thine" in place of "your." (e.g. "Send the wind, my darling love, to whisper your name in my ear." would become Send the wind, my darlig love, to whisper thy name in my ear." and "Then, thus entwined, will your heart beat in rhythm ..." would become Then, thus entwined, will thine heart beat in rhythm.) [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I enjoyed this. Very passionate, interesting imagery. Hope to read more of you. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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