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She's gone to Georgia
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She's gone to Georgia |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
I've heard she's gone to Georgia Gone, Lord, as I've feared And the love that I never knew Is now no longer near Just like a rose I watched her fade from view And the thorns, they cut so deep They've cut my heart in two Now I sit here patiently As the days slip slowly by I still question why she's gone Still don"t know the reason why Maybe I'm a fool To hang on to this dream I thought there was so much more to us Much more than it now seems But now I've heard she's gone to Georgia Gone, Lord, as I've feared And the love that I never knew Is now no longer near Just like a rose I watched her fade from view And the thorns, they cut so deep They've cut my heart in two I've heard she's gone to Georgia Gone, Lord, as I've feared And the love that I never knew Is now no longer near lost in thought, found in words. |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
Nicely written. I hope that you find the love that you never knew. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting..reads like a song... I enjoyed the "voice" of this poem... could hear it in my mind... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
The repetitiveness of your words seem to emphasize your deep longing. I really liked how you wrote this and I do hope your dream comes true..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I got a scare recently...I thought a friend of mine was moving to California...but she's only visiting....James |
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