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That You Love Me
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That You Love Me |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I just now realized Like I have on some occasions About ten thousand times before That you love me I love our feigning battle To profess our adoration To see who loves each other more Could it be continuous? I love you A daisy petal falls I love you more Another hits the floor There’s no dying to this flower We’ve revolved it o’er and o’er There’s no “love-me-nots” to share Just “I love you” “I love you more” Plummet petals into the pond If they float up to your door All their passion will be noted You will answer, “I love you more” So how can I proceed with love “I love you so”, “you love me more” Would a kiss and close embrace Help me settle the phantom score I think we both could say our love Grows more and more each day And though the daisy is threadbare The roots of love will stay I love you I love you more This, the song That I adore… [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
oh this is just wonderful Walt |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I absolutely adore this, so more please! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wayout, Good one, a keeper. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A beautiful battle of the sexes assuring neither will be ex's. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
One of your best Walt!!! You should write more romantic poetry.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really like this poem Walt...James |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
OOOOO I GOT GOOSBUMPS & REALIZED 1/2 WAY THRU READING IT THAT I HAD A SILLY GRIN ACROSS MY FACE! |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
some great thoughts here, subject is cool. i like this part the most... So how can I proceed with love “I love you so”, “you love me more” Would a kiss and close embrace Help me settle the phantom score phantom score - nice choice of words. this is quite a song but whos gonna sing it know, you cant go wrong so why not just bring it |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Walt, this truly is a most sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet poem and I gotta tell ya I just adore it... Muaaaaaah on cheekz sweetie cuz your poem is like a precious jewel it's something that all of us readers may appreciate every time we glance at it we discover more beauty to it again N again... Muaah on cheeks PoetFriend *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you all so so so much |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Walty, this is so beautiful.... "I love you" "I love you more" ahuh, I understand this completely. Wonderful work m'friend. into my library it goes. Maree "little miss understood |
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